So I finished watching Story for Steven and the really burning question that I want to see discussed is this: Do you think that Greg is a reliable narrator?
I started to get really suspicious of his story when I saw the depiction of his manager
I mean really? Did he really have his teeth filed to points like that?
The character of Marty doesn't make sense when you think about it. He gets painted as this soulless big city music producer trying to leech off Greg's fame and talent, but Greg doesn't really have any fame or talent to leech off of. From his own purely selfish interest, why would Marty be wasting his time on this little twerp when he could find better prospects at any open mic night down at the local coffee shop? The fact that he gets painted as a disgusting womanizing pig also seems just a little too convenient in a story where a man is explaining to his son his choice to give up his music career to pursue a monogamous relationship.
I think it's very important that we also examine the character of Rose more closely. The closest thing we have to a direct, objective appearance of her was in the videotape she made for Steven. Everything else we've heard about her comes secondhand from people who are very much biased in Rose's favor. She keeps getting painted as this gentle, pacifist soul who only heals and defends the ones she loves, but remember that this gem fomented a rebellion and led a military campaign against homeworld. She was a leader, a captain, someone with an incredible ability to make others fight and die for her. The fact that she has the ability to magically manipulate desire as is evidenced by her room makes me very suspicious as to whether this charisma was born entirely from the justice of her cause. I think that Rose is still a good character with a genuine love for Earth, but people who fight and win wars are usually the kinds willing to believe that the ends justify the means.
What purpose did Rose have for making Steven? Remember that Steven wasn't just an accident, that Rose had to take very active steps to alter her body and give herself reproductive capacity. Why would she go through all that? It doesn't make sense to think that she would sacrifice herself and rob the whole earth of its greatest champion just so she could have a human baby. I think Rose foresaw that as a gem/human hybrid, Steven would have unique abilities that would make him a very powerful asset in the defense of earth, and she actively sought a human consort to make him with. Greg was just some dopey young guy with a loyal disposition and really not much of a life ahead of him to speak of, a perfect candidate to father and watch out for the new hybrid.
What if this is what really happened: Greg was some wannabe rockstar and Marty was a friend of his who genuinely cared about him and tried to help him make it big. When Rose started seducing Greg, Marty tried to warn him away from this chick whom he sensed was trying to rob him of his dreams for some ulterior motive. Head over heels in love, Greg was disgusted that Marty would even suggest such a thing and accuses him of being a greedy, soulless bastard. The two fight and have a schism, and Greg goes on to help Rose make her super weapon
What do you think?